Here is a piece written for the dVerse Poets PubProsery” challenge. For those unfamiliar, the Prosery challenge invites writers to craft a piece of flash fiction or prose of exactly 144 words, incorporating a specific line from a poem—in this case, the haunting phrase “lips forget what they have kissed” (by Toni Morrison).

This piece also serves as a thematic nod to the story “Clay and Memory” from the collection Folklore and Flesh, exploring the terrifying permanence of the earth versus the fleeting nature of the body.


Vessel

The kiln fires us into being, but the heat steals our names. We are hollow vessels, spun from wet earth and old ghosts, waiting to be filled. I trace the cracks in my ceramic skin, seeking the potter’s fingerprint, that first violent touch of creation. You claimed the body is a landscape, etched by wind and rain, but erosion is a thief. It smooths the sharp peaks of grief into a flat, unmoving plain.

My mind is a sieve, losing water and time, unable to hold the shape of who I was before the firing. It is a terrifying mercy that the lips forget what they have kissed, yet the mouth remains forever shaped by the words it once whispered.

We crumble back to dust, and in the silence of the soil, the clay finally remembers what the living flesh could not hold true.


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22 responses to “The Shape of Forgetting | dVerse Prosery Challenge”

  1. Willy, I just read the clay story in your book yesterday. Your nod to it today is beautiful and wise.

    1. Thank you Lisa. I hope the story wasn’t too boring. I really tried with that story but it’s honestly my 2nd to last favorite. I feel it falls flat after a while, compared to the other stories.

      1. Willy one thing I would never say about your stories, any of them, is that they are boring! You come up with such creative ideas, genuinely original.

        1. Awesome, thanks Lisa 😊

          1. You are welcome.

      2. p.s. You are welcome.

  2. This is beautiful writing. I love the effective inclusion of the elements. A profound and thought-provoking piece. Thanks for sharing.

    1. – Mish

    2. Thanks for reading!

  3. I enjoyed the metaphor. You filled this hollow vessel.

    1. Thank you for reading.

  4. I enjoyed your Prosery-monologue, Willy, the way you explore the elements, and especially the idea that we are ‘hollow vessels, spun from wet earth and old ghosts…seeking the potter’s fingerprint, that first violent touch of creation’. Perhaps time is also an element, as suggested by the mind as ‘a sieve, losing water and time’.

    1. Thank you Kim! I greatly appreciate it and your time for reading. The idea actually came from one of my short stories in which a widowed man tries to recreate his wife with futuristic clay 🙂

      1. You’re most welcome, Willy!

  5. Love the metaphor… it works so well with the sense of being.

    1. Thanks again for always reading, Bjorn.

  6. This is really great. I love your metaphor of being pottery with cracks as we age, and then going back the earth once again while the earth lives on.

    1. On some days I feel as cracked as the pottery, 🙂

      1. I know what you mean!

  7. Awesome, loved the pottery metaphor. Perfectly shaped prose!

    1. Thank you for reading.

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