When I saw this week’s dVerse Quadrille prompt—a poem of exactly 44 words using some form of “flower”—I felt that familiar tug toward the strange. Flowers are supposed to be gentle, decorative, symbols of softness and spring. But I’ve always been drawn to the moments when the natural world leans in a little too close…when it feels like it’s paying attention back.

Maybe it’s the horror writer in me. Or maybe it’s the part of me that believes communication doesn’t stop at species lines. Maybe it’s just that February has me craving something alive. Even if that “something” is a little uncanny.

Either way, this prompt opened a door—and something green and patient stepped through.

Listening to the Flowers

The flower leaned toward me, 
like it recognized a thought
I hadn’t spoken.
Its petals trembled,
brushing the air with a quiet intention.
I felt it listening,
patient and aware,
until the soil shifted beneath us—slow,
deliberate—reminding me the
conversation had already begun.

Writing this felt like eavesdropping on a root‑deep whisper network—one of those moments where nature doesn’t just sit pretty; it participates. It listens. It answers.

And honestly? That’s the kind of energy I love bringing into my fiction: the sense that the world is alive in ways we haven’t fully learned to hear yet.

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13 responses to “Listening to the Flowers: My Quadrille for dVerse”

  1. how right you got this. Nature is listening and talking to us. Only if we pay attention will we hear their message, like you say, “something green and patient stepped through.” Thanks for sharing this.

    1. Yes! Thank you for reading and commenting 🙏

  2. Willy, it’s a holistic and comforting feeling to be one of the community of nature. If we listen we are accepted, instead of standing apart as a vanquisher to use/abuse/exploit. I like your p.o.v. and how you tuned in.

    1. I couldn’t agree more and I try to be more holistic in my way of life. It can be hard often times but I try.

      1. I see that perspective in your short stories I’m reading.

        1. You are the best for buying and reading my fiction. If you live in the US I can send you a signed copy for free and you can gift the version you have now.

          1. Willy, I have an e-copy of the book. Thanks for the offer, but no thanks. Do you know about Chuck Palahniuk’s substack? I think your work would fit right in there.

  3. Charming poetry.

    1. Thank you for reading 🙏

  4. Talking to flowers… it is said that they bloom better if you do 🙂

    1. Ha! So true, too. All good Shamans talk with their plants and with nature.

  5. How beautifully mysterious!

    1. Thank you for reading 📚 ❤️

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