Welcome back to the pub. Here is a new piece written for the dVerse Poets “Quadrille” challenge. If you haven’t participated before, the Monday Quadrille invites writers to craft a poem of exactly 44 words, incorporating a specific prompt word. Today’s word is “hunger.”

I absolutely love these tight constraints. They force you to trim the fat and leave only the bone, weaving a complete narrative in a single breath.

The Velvet Trap

He praised the velvet finish, 
oblivious to the bone meal 
resting deep within our soil. 
We poured another glass, 
watching his flushed throat 
swallow the trap. Such a beautiful, 
intoxicating surrender. 
Tonight, our ancient family hunger 
will feast on far more than 
fermented grapes.

This piece is a direct nod to my short story, “Dark Vintage,” from the Folklore and Flesh collection. I wanted to use this prompt to slip back into the minds of the dangerously beautiful family of cannibals who run that lush, sun-drenched winery hidden deep in the hills.

Rather than focusing on the cellar doors locking, I wanted this poem to capture the quiet, macabre intimacy of the tasting room right before the prey realizes what he actually is.

Thank you for visiting with me. For more Poetry or Literature related content, visit my blog at The Ritual.

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4 responses to “The Velvet Trap | dVerse Quadrille Challenge”

  1. A quiet, hungry horror, Willy. Well done 👏

  2. Elegant and gruesome, Willy. I’m watching the new season of Dexter and this scene would fit right into it.

    1. Thanks Li – I have heard good things about that show but haven’t watched it myself.

      1. You are welcome. I’ve watched every season. A few years back they added a new season that was a revamp and it wasn’t that good. Now they have gone back to what worked before and oh yes, it’s excellent.

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