This is an attempt to capture the element/feeling of grief in poetry, in response to DVerses prompt post in “Poetics: Picking up the Pieces. ”

As a father with a co-parenting schedule, I get most of the time with my daughter during Summer breaks, in which I get her half-time. Towards the end of the Season, right before school starts, I begin to feel sorrow as my time with her will slow down with the school year and I won’t get to see her as much. This honestly puts me in a funk every Summer’s end.

Summer’s End

Our days of Sunshine
and smile are coming to an end.
a heatwave of summer fests, bike rides,
bug hunts and lake trips
will soon eclipse, as it
does on every school's return,
calling kids back to learn.

With the Season's winding down
the schedules change,
and my time with you
will also wane
even just the thought
of fewer days brings pain.
How I'll miss our weeklong
quests of swimming, ice cream trips,
and late-night binging.

It's in the Summer where
you learned to ride a bike,
cannon balled into the pool,
pulled tomatoes from the garden,
tested your courage at six-flags,
stayed up late watching horror films,
built sand castles on the Ocean's beach,

It's no wonder that I call you my Sunshine,
making Summer's brighter
and the other Seasons
dimmer.

The end of summer brings a mix of emotions for many parents, especially those with co-parenting schedules. While the school year means less time together, the memories made during the summer will always hold a special place in our hearts. For more heartfelt poetry and literature, visit our blog at The Ritual.

Poem by Willy Martinez, and is intended for Mind on Fire Books only.*

17 responses to “Embracing the Bittersweet Farewell of Summer’s End: Parenting and Cherished Moments”

  1. Much enjoyed! While it’s a shame you can’t spend more time with her, these wonderful holidays will be highlights in her experience and her memories.

  2. A heartfelt piece that shines with so many memories to cherish. I do think she is one lucky girl.

    1. Awe, thank you for the kind words 💖

  3. There is definitely a grief we feel as parents being away from our children.💔

    1. It’s comforting to hear I’m not the only one 🙂

  4. Oh, this could be for grammas and grampas too! You capture the sadness so well.

    1. Yes, it could! Thank you 🙂

  5. Although it’s a long time since my daughter was at school, I remember the end of the summer holidays. I won’t be seeing my grandsons this summer, but I’m off to spend some time with them at the beginning of September, just before the oldest one goes back to school. I love all the things that you do with your Sunshine and the joy that oozes from your lines, despite the sadness that it’s coming to an end – but only for a while.

    1. Yeah, it’s always a happy/sad feeling, to watch them grow up and learn to be their own little person.

  6. The poem took me back my school holidays in England, not that I ever did much with my mum at that but you captured the nostalgic feeling here of what has just gone.

  7. It’s funny that kids are sent back to school to learn, but think about all she is learning on her field trips with you.

  8. Heartfelt writing! Your daughter will never forget those summer holidays with her Dad. They will be well imprinted upon her heart.

  9. Willy, through your words I can feel how much you cherish spending time with your daughter. Once she is back with her mother, the days must seem darker.
    Your love shines through your verse and cheer up she will be back again. Thanks for sharing this special time with your sunshine with us.

    1. Thank you for reading and for the kind words.

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