This piece is a response to the Ragtag Daily Prompt: Glabrous — a word that suggests smoothness, bareness, the clean surface left after something has shed or been pared down. It’s the perfect word for the hours leading into the fall equinox.

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Where The Season Smooths

Morning carried a strange stillness, the kind that feels shaved down to essentials. The sky wore its muted pewter, and the trees trembled with early brown/gold, as if they sensed the hinge of the season approaching. I moved through the day with that hum of anticipation — not loud, not cosmic, but intimate. A quiet excitement that makes you notice the lengthening shadows and the surprisingly slight coolness that greets you at the door.

Then the equinox arrives. No fireworks, no grand announcement. Just a subtle tipping, a settling in the body. A glabrous clarity — smooth, bare, honest — that feels like both an ending and a beginning.

Afterward comes the afterglow: a soft melancholy braided with renewal. Summer exhales. Autumn steps forward. And you carry that shift with you into the evening, knowing the world has turned, and you’ve turned with it.


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2 responses to “The Quiet Before the Shift: A Fall Equinox Micro‑Essay”

  1. Wonderful use of words to describe a time of year. The second last paragarph is my favourite.
    Thanks for joining in RDP 😀

    1. Thanks for having me. I love seasonal shifts and the energies they summon.

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