In the labyrinth of literary exploration, “The Midnight Library” by Matt Haig reveals a corridor filled with doors to countless possibilities. Yet, as I meander through this maze, I feel the journey weighs down under an excess of verbosity, with an overextension of narrative that serves no discernible purpose.

Because of the redundancy and wordiness, I award this one a mere 2 coffee mugs out of 5.

My Thoughts on The Midnight Library: An Intriguing Concept Hindered by Narrative Overabundance

Haig’s novel is a foray into the speculative, where protagonist Nora Seed finds herself in a library beyond the edge of life and death. Each book is a portal to what could have been. The premise is undeniably intriguing—a buffet of lives untasted, paths untraveled. However, the execution is akin to a dish that fails to deliver on its promises. Instead of an explosion of flavors, it delivers an overwhelming blandness that numbs the palate.

The narrative sprawls out like a banquet table with too many dishes instead of creating a tightrope of tension and excitement. Some dishes remain undercooked, while others become over-seasoned. The reader wades through a sea of beautifully crafted words that feel as necessary as a fifth wheel on a carriage.

It pains me to say that “The Midnight Library,” despite its potential, fails to deliver the concise and impactful story. It is the story that I would have rather read. For in the end, it is not the quantity of the words that matters, but the potency of their meaning. And in this case, less would have been infinitely more.

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To enhance “The Midnight Library,” the story could have benefited from:

  • Conciseness: Trimming superfluous details would have sharpened the narrative focus and pace, making each word count and each scene impactful.
  • Depth Over Breadth: Instead of exploring too many life scenarios superficially, delving deeply into fewer, more significant ones could have provided richer emotional and philosophical insights.
  • Character Development: More nuanced character arcs for Nora and supporting characters could have fostered a stronger connection with the reader.
  • Purposeful Prose: Ensuring that every chapter, scene, and line serves the story’s central theme would have made the reading experience more cohesive and meaningful.

By addressing these aspects, the book could have offered a more engaging and satisfying exploration of its compelling premise.

Detailed Synopsis of “The Midnight Library” by Matt Haig

Nora Seed, a woman in her mid-thirties, is struggling with regret and despair. After a series of unfortunate events, including the death of her cat, losing her job, and feeling disconnected from her loved ones, Nora decides to end her life. However, instead of dying, she finds herself in the Midnight Library, a place between life and death. This library is filled with books representing different versions of her life. Each details what could have happened had she made different choices.

Guided by the enigmatic Mrs. Elm, her high-school librarian, Nora plunges into a chaotic exploration of alternate realities that shatter her notion of self. She lives out wild scenarios, from rekindling a disastrous romance with her ex-fiancé Dan to chasing competitive swimming thrills. She jams with her brother Joe in a ragged band and more absurd choices. Each alternate life forces her to confront the painful truth about regret. She learns about the elusive nature of happiness and the tangled web of her choices. As she navigates through this kaleidoscope of possibilities, Nora uncovers a deeper understanding of her own worth. The staggering power of seemingly insignificant acts of kindness ripples through her existence.

Character Breakdown

  • Nora Seed: A British woman in her thirties who regrets her choices and explores different lives to find meaning.
  • Mrs. Elm: Nora’s high school librarian and the librarian of the Midnight Library. She acts as a mentor and guide for Nora, helping her navigate her regrets and discover a deeper meaning in life.
  • Joe Seed: Nora’s brother, a gay musician. Their relationship is complex, with their fates intertwined in various ways across different lives.
  • Dan Lord: Nora’s ex-fiancé and the antagonist in some of Nora’s lives. He often undermines Nora’s self-belief and is a negative influence on her.
  • Izzy Hirsh: Nora’s best friend and a whale watching tour guide. Nora feels estranged from Izzy in her root life because she didn’t join Izzy in moving to Australia.
  • Ravi: The drummer of Nora and Joe’s band, The Labyrinths. He has an antagonistic relationship with Nora and blames her for Joe’s lack of success.
  • Mr. Banerjee: Nora’s kind old neighbor whom she helps with his medication.
  • Nora’s Parents: Her mother and father, who both have passed away, have left Nora with feelings of regret.

“The Midnight Library” is a thought-provoking exploration of life’s infinite possibilities and the importance of appreciating the life we have. It delves into the idea that even the smallest decisions can significantly change our lives and the lives of those around us. The novel ultimately conveys a message of hope and the value of life.


The article was written by a dark fiction author, Willy Martinez, to be released on the Ritual Blog for Mind on Fire Books.

Willy Martinez is local to Southern Illinois. Author of dark fiction Mythology, “The Sigua” and short visceral fiction, “Flora.”

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